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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#money #businesses #responsibilities
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The aim for every
business
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 is to gain profit as much as they can. Some people claim that businesses need to contribute to the well-being of
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society. In my point of view, it is required for every
company
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 to have a corporate social responsibilities program because of some reasons mentioned below.
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, without
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employees
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 no
business
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 can be run, which means
employees
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 are one of the most important resources of a
company
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. So every
company
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 should care about their
employees
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 who support the success of their
business
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.
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, a paint manufacturing
company
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 should provide a medical
check up
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 program to its
employees
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 yearly since some chemicals can be harmful to humans.
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, companies should have a CSR program for the environment since there might be impacts on the environment because of their
business
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,
for
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example
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,
pollution
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 can be caused because of the waste from factories since some companies throw thrashes
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 the river and gas produced from some industries can lead to air
pollution
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.
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, companies should take part in community programs since the community
also
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 has to suffer from the side effects made by
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business
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businesses
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.
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, if there was air
pollution
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 in the town because of factories, people living in that town had to suffer from the
pollution
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 as well.
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, businesses should have social responsibilities
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the
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society,
for
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example
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, put some proportion of profit
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 local charities. If they contribute to the well-being of
its
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their
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employees
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, the environment and
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society, their image will be enhanced and they can get awareness from the public. It is a win-win situation for
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company
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.
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, even though making
profit
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a profit
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 is the main purpose for every
company
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, they should take social
responsibilities
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responsibility
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 and contribute to the well-being of people and things related to their
business
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 so that they can get recognition from the public which is valuable to the image of the
company
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Social responsibilities
  • Corporate social responsibility
  • Ethical behavior
  • Societal impact
  • Stakeholders
  • Profit-driven
  • Public perception
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Community development
  • Human rights
  • Workplace safety
  • Altruism
  • Balanced approach
  • Accountability
  • Consumer loyalty
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