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Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. how might having a lot of money make people happy? what other things in life make poeple happy?

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Many individuals opine that a direct route
of
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happiness
 is wealth.People who have a lot of
money
 can have
more
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a more
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 comfortable
life
 than the ones who
does
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do
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 not
have
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.
However
, there are other things in
life
 which
is
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are
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 more important
then
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than
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money
 and give individual satisfaction and
helps
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help
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 to create
happiness
 in
life
. on the one hand, there are
numerouse
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numerous
 ways to be happy when
masses
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the masses
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 have
a
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apply
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gigabucks
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megabucks
.
Firstly
, they have
a
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apply
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easy access
of
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to
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 every convenient thing they want in
life
.
For example
, expensive
house
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houses
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 or cars.
Secondly
, they can travel the world and can visit where ever they like. The ability to own anything and do whatever they want gives them joy.
Thus
,
money
 helps people to own any kind of
life
 they want to enjoy.
On the contrary
, with a lot of
money
 people can bring
happiness
 in
thier
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their
 lives but it does not mean that there is not any other thing which can make them happy.The best example of it is relationships and family. A healthy relationship
provide
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 multitudes immense joy and
by
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apply
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spending
a
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apply
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quality time with
lovedones
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loved ones
give
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gives
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 them
satistfaction
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satisfaction
.
Thus
,
human
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a human
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 cannot enjoy their whole
life
 with only
money
, they need
thier
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their
 family around, with whom they can share their
happiness
.
To conclude
,
money
 is important to survive in
this
 materialistic world and
money
 can be a way to enjoy
life
buy
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by
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 buying expensive things but having family and friends around gives satisfaction in
life
.
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