It is generally observed that almost all high level jobs are done by men. Does it mean that the government should encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women? Do you agree or disagree with this proposition.

Since the start of human
civilization
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males and females have coexisted together and supported each other. It has been observed that most high-level
jobs
are being performed by males. Some are of the opinion that
women
should be provided
reservations
by the government,
while
a vast group of individuals are against
such
practices. I am of the opinion that
reservations
for
women
for a limited time are helpful in looking at the global picture. Providing
reservations
to high-level
jobs
to
women
against men is helpful in many ways.
First,
it brings parity at work and improves the level playing field between co-workers. It
also
enhances the stature of
women
in society, thereby uplifting and encouraging more girls to follow that path.
Moreover
, it gives a sense of safety and confidence not just at home, but
also
at work ,to perform and excel at their job duties.
For instance
, Mary Barra who is the CEO of GM company,is performing wonderful and leading GM to new heights.
Hence
,
reservations
can help in uplifting the
women
's community by instilling confidence and providing an equal playing field. Contrary to that thought process, there are reasonable oppositions to any form of
reservations
to any group. First and foremost, people perceive
this
as a form of bias against men, and not having equal opportunities. They rightly say that individuals should work up the organization structure
instead
of any unjust reservation for benefiting a specific group.
Moreover
, promoting
reservations
gives a ray of hope for similar demands from other marginalized communities in the future.
For example
, OBC
reservations
in institutions, and government
jobs
have led to significant unrest in the peace in India. So it’s hard to neglect the negative implications of the reservation. Owing to most elite-level
jobs
occupied by men, the idea of the government providing
reservations
to
women
is definitely a good way to enhance
women
’s representation at the top levels.
However
, looking at the downsides,
this
should be granted only for a specific time frame to allow
women
's community to uplift themselves, so as to not lead to any form of discrimination against others ,or encourage
such
requests in future.
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Example:

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