The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

The Maps depict how it was before renovation and its present architectural outlook.
Overall
, some structures were demolished to build more relaxation facilities at present, for people's satisfaction. Looking at the first map, the rose garden at the lower left side was removed completely,
then
the one at the upper right corner of the garden was replaced with a cafe and now relocated centrally, surrounded by four seats that were previously placed at the four edges of the Grange square,
although
a fountain once occupied where
this
rose garden is present.
In addition
, the pond for the water plants made way for the new children's playground today,
while
a portable water feature can be seen, occupying where the glasshouse used to be in 1920. In the second Map, a big amphitheatre for concerts is currently sited on the left region of Grange Park, which replaced the building allocated to Musicians for a stage play. A new underground car estate is now situated at the right downward corner, outside the place. Despite the renovations, the locations of the following are still unchanged (Arnold Avenue, Eldon Street and the two main entrances to the plaza ).
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  • recreational facilities
  • landscaping
  • naturalistic
  • amenities
  • formal gardens
  • ergonomic
  • symmetric designs
  • inclusive
  • accessible
  • accommodations
  • native plant species
  • societal changes
  • visitor services
  • community events
  • evolution
  • modern playgrounds
  • wildflower meadows
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