Some people believe that countries should invite foreign companies to open their brunches, offices and factories in order to develop their economies. Others think countries should invest in their own companies instead. Discuss both view and give your opinions.

The economy is an essential sector in any country

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should take care

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some people claim that

countries

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should attract foreign

companies

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to run their

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to flourish their

economies

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, others believe that

countries

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should invest in their local

companies

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instead

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. I believe the

countries

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should develop and increase their local

companies

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rather than depending on foreign business. on the one hand, the

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gives opportunities to foreign

businesses

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to be operated on their lands which ends up generating a huge profit and

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there will be a lot of job opportunities for the jobless. for ,example some golf

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depend on foreign

companies

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to build and boost their

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. So, some people believe if the authorities allow international

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to run their

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, it will be beneficial for their

economies

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, people think that the more

countries

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invest in their own

companies

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the more beneficial their

economies

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will be. The main reason behind

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the

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will depend on themself to create and develop their

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of depending on foreigners,

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if the

countries

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took care of their local

companies

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, they would turn out to be international

companies

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, Tushiba Alaraby was an Egyptian local company and the Egyptian

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invested money and time in it and

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it has become an international company. investing in a local company is important to progress the economy without depending on foreign

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. in conclusion. some individuals believe that

countries

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should give foreign business opportunities to start

businesses

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to make progress in the

economies

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I believe the

government

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should support their own

businesses

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instead

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