In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In some countries,

home owners

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are more essential

existance

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existence

than

people

rent their living place. Some individuals think that owning a

home

is not only for living but

also

the

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value of

realestate

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real estate

will surge in the future.

Moreover

, I believe that gaining

population

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of owning their house is quite

positive

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a positive

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circumustance

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circumstance

circumstances

for building up

safe

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a safe

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and comfortable environment for

human

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a human

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being

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beings

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.

To begin

with, citizens prefer to have their own

realestates

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real estate

because they expect the value of

home

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the home

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to increase as

investment

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an investment

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in the future. Once the value

get

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higher and

sell

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sold

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, the property

of

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or

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the home

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home owner

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homeowner

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could increase.

For example

, my

firends

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friends

bought their house 10 years ago in order to live with their family and

a

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future investment,

then

now the cost of the building surged more than 5 times larger than

original

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the original

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price.

Therefore

, it is essential that

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becomes

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become

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a

home owner

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homeowner

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because it has

a

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an

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obvious benefit.

Furthermore

, more

people

prefer to live in their own

home

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homes

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have a more positive impact

to

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on

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the

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apply

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society because it makes the living area safer and more comfortable. If neighbours just rent their house, their turnover rate

go

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up rather than

home

owners,

then

it is difficult to maintain a good relationship among neighbours.

For instance

, when I used to live in an apartment

which

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basically

people

rent the rooms, I could not build

up

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any

relationship

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relationships

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and felt not safe because all neighbours move constantly.

Hence

, living in a owning

home

and building up

relationship

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relationships

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is quite positive.

To conclude

, owning a

home

is quite essential for

people

who think their investment

not

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is not

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only for individuals who look for their living place.

Additionally

, the situation that citizens become

home owners

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homeowners

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more and more has a huge benefit because better

communications

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communication

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in the living area builds up

safer

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a safer

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and

comfortable

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more comfortable

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living environment.