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Air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world. Ordinary people can not get any advantage with the development of air travel. To what extent do agree or disagree?

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who
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believe that
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airline services can only afford by the
people
 who are financially sound and the common
people
 will not get benefits from the progression
or
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 that system. In my
prospective
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, it bought equal opportunities for
every one
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 in terms of cheap air tickets and affordability. Primarily,
now a days
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 there are several airline companies running budget flights around the globe, which can get
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easy
acces
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access
 by all
people
 with discrimination. To illustrate , the competition
with in
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 these companies is compelling the operators to keep the price low , so that they can attract
the
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people
 and earn more business.
Thus
 it can be easily affordable for
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people
 who are not rich and they can save
their
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time
with out
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 spending huge amounts.
On the other hand
, the regular
controll
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control
controls
 and regulations from the government over the airline companies to retain the ticket price controlled
is
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 making a
low
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cost
travel
 possible. The easy availability and
acces
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access
 to the airports in the various parts of the country and enhanced facilities and
acces
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access
 to
such
place
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also
reducing
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 the
cost
 of
travel
 .
Apart from
this
, the other modes of
travel
is
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also
 expensive like the flight charges in most of the routes .
For example
 , the train services in Europe
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similarly
cost
 as the air tickets
moreover
,the flight journey saves a lot of time and saves money.
Hence
 it is not expensive and which easily
afford
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 to common
people
 . In conclusion, there is no diversity between rich and poor in terms of air
travel
, because the budget airlines and government involvement
helps
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 everyone to use
this
 mode of transport .
Moreover
 increased access and similar
cost
 compared to other transport methods controlled the difference between rich and poor.
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