Write a letter to your neighbor requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: – Your reason for writing – What you would like to happen – A nice, respectful style

Dear Mr Hosam , I am your next-door neighbour .I am writing to you in connection with the behaviour of your
dog
eventually. I like dogs but your
dog
needs more control . I know you are a new resident but you have to pay more attention to your
dog
. Yesterday , your
dog
enter my garden and make a big mess there . He damaged my precious set of flowers .
Moreover
, the pops he always made on the stairs in front of my door , it makes a bad odour in the hall of my house. I can not tolerate
such
behaviour for long . Considering the above said , I demand you put more regulations on your
dog
so I hope he does not repeat
this
mess again . We are all neighbours and we have to respect each other . Have a nice day . Yours sincerely , Asma
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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