The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
Overall
, the number of wheat
exports had various trends in these areas, which was a decline in Australia, an increase in the European
community
, and stability in Canada. In addition
, the European
community
exported the most wheat
in the research period.
15 million
of
Change preposition
apply
tons
was the quantity of wheat
that Australia exported in 1985. This
was the lowest, while
the figures for Canada and the European
Community
were higher in 1985, with about 19 million
tons
and 17 million
tons
, respectively. The number of wheat
exported in Australia increased slightly to 16 million
tons
but then
decreased gradually to 11 million
tons
in 1989, which remained unchanged until the end of the period.
There was a significant fluctuation in the quantity of wheat
exported in
Canada. The figure decreased gradually from 19 Change preposition
to
million
tons
in 1985 to 17 million
tons
in 1986, but it reached a peak at 25 million
tons
in 1988. Finally
, this
figure remained unchanged compared with starting point, with about 19 million
tons
. Only the European
community
witnessed a slight increase. Despite the fluctuation, the figure went down minimally to under 15 million
tons
, then
it grew gradually to 21 million
tons
at the end
of the period.Submitted by mtgngocanh on
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