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The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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, the number of
wheat
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 exports had various trends in these areas, which was a decline in Australia, an increase in the
European
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community
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, and stability in Canada.
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, the
European
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community
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 exported the most
wheat
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 in the research period. 15
million
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of
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tons
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 was the quantity of
wheat
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 that Australia exported in 1985.
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 was the lowest,
while
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 the figures for Canada and the
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Community
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 were higher in 1985, with about 19
million
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tons
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 and 17
million
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tons
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, respectively. The number of
wheat
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 exported in Australia increased slightly to 16
million
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tons
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 but
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 decreased gradually to 11
million
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tons
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 in 1989, which remained unchanged until the end of the period. There was a significant fluctuation in the quantity of
wheat
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 exported
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 Canada. The figure decreased gradually from 19
million
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tons
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 in 1985 to 17
million
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tons
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 in 1986, but it reached a peak at 25
million
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tons
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 in 1988.
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,
this
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 figure remained unchanged compared with starting point, with about 19
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tons
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. Only the
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community
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 witnessed a slight increase. Despite the fluctuation, the figure went down minimally to under 15
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tons
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,
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 it grew gradually to 21
million
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tons
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at the end
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 of the period.
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