The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories
The given bar chart illustrates the export earnings of one country between 2015 and 2016
while
the table provides information about the changes in their value. From an
overall
perspective, it can be seen that petroleum products had the highest rate
whereas
textiles experienced the biggest increase. And all of the graphs climbed except the hems and jewellery one. To delve deeper into the data, petroleum exports rose slightly by exactly 3% to reach just below 65
billion
dollars. Engineering goods
also
had high figures and its goods increased by 8,5% to over 80
billion
dollars in 2016. Jems and jewellery is the sole figure which dropped by 5,18% and accounted for roughly 40
billion
in the second year. Agricultural products remained relatively the same with a slight increase below 1%
while
textiles figures saw an upward trend with more than 15% to even exceed 30
billion
dollars in earnings.
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