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some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research

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Attention to
history
 is a growing trend for different communities around the world since the invention of
the
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writing. People who can read and write easily access
the
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older
information
 especially the
history
about
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of
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 their cities
by
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 these abilities. In some countries, bigger
communties
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communities
 are curious about the
history
 of the properties or
buildings
 they live in over time. Increased demand
on
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 historical
places
 or their unique structure may
related
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this
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 issue.
Curiosity
 for historical
places
 results in more individuals looking for historical houses or
buildings
 which are attractive
for
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 locals and tourists.
This
 intrinsic behaviour
growths
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 popularity of vintage and unique architecture.
Furthermore
, their unique structures may fascinate local communities.
For instance
, In Italy not only the Pisa Tower attracts tourists, but Italians love
this
 monumental tower because of its unique
bended
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 shape
also
. The combination of
curiosity
 and characteristics of
buildings
 improves demand
on
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 historical
places
 in many counties.
Although
curiosity
 and different features of
buildings
 are important for increased interest in historical
buildings
, the methods of research for these attractions are
crutial
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crucial
critical
. People can access the location of historical
places
 on "Google Maps" which is
important
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 online tool for the location of
places
, and details on palaces with "
Vikipedia
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Wikipedia
".
On the other hand
, local libraries might contain some
information
 about these
places
 but
its
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 requires more time to research it. These methods can help locals to understand detailed
information
 about the
buildings
. In conclusion, more and more people are
involving
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 to find
about
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out about
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 the
history
 of the
buildings
 which are close to their homes. Increased
curiosity
 and
properties
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properties'
property's
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 unique structure might affect
this
 demand, and they can access
the
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information
 about these
places
 with "Google Maps" and "
Vikipedia
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Wikipedia
".
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