Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is an irrefutable fact that perilous issues that risk not only land's greenery but
also
, world count and literacy level are hovering all over the globe. To specify, elevation in global warming, overpopulation and illiteracy has become one of the major causes of concern for most of the countries. This
essay shall further
enlist probable problems that the Indian country will come across in the coming decade and suggest plausible solutions to handle such
extremities.
To start off, the Indian nation has already become the largest overpopulated country with the least land mass surpassing China. It also
has the lowest literacy rate
and a high rate
of pollution. To further
elaborate, it would be natural to observe issues such
as high poverty, child labour as well as
a lower standard of living that would consequently
follow . Ultimately, the situation will undoubtedly worsen in the coming years
. For instance
, due to
the unaffordability of schooling facilities by a majority of native people, the literacy rate
is
getting lower and lower in the past few Wrong verb form
has been
years
and would
probably decline more in the coming Wrong verb form
will
years
.
To tackle these issues on a war footing, the government should come forward and launch strict rules to control the birth rate
either by providing subsidies or other non-financial benefits to the ones birthing a single child. Moreover
, stern decisions should be taken towards industries and households contributing towards environmental pollution by governmental and non-profit organisations. To substantiate, a list could be carried out against the corporations who follow illegal practices such
as discharging effluents in water bodies or
dumping non-biodegradable waste on land or failing to properly Correct word choice
apply
dispose-off
hazardous raw material by imposing hefty fines.
Correct your spelling
dispose of
To conclude
, this
could be ingeminated
that our country is already on the path of exploitation and dealing with major concerns like overpopulation, illiteracy, poverty, and air and water pollution. Not to forget, that the situation will only worsen in upcoming Verb problem
argued
years
. In order to save the nation from falling apart, the government and varied institutions should come forward and take reasonable initiatives such
as imposing tough regulations on those harming environment
and promoting a single-child policy by giving financial gifts.Correct article usage
the environment
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