Universities should allocate the same amount of money to students sports activities as they allocate to their libraries. To what extent do you agree with this view

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money

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students

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sports

activities has been a

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issue for individuals . As far as l am concerned, there are many

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for spend

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students

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exercise. I

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with

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subject .

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illustration of these reasons is provided below . The primary reason to take into account is both of the facilities ,

students

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sports

and

library

is viral

for

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universities

. It can be

further

claimed that nowadays

sports

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activities of

students

have decreased a lot .

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addition

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sports

program in the

universities

must

added

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.

On the other

hand

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most of the

universities

have libraries and do not have

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or facilities for

students

exercise

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in my city , the

university

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not have any

gym

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sports

and

students

should go to

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or seat in

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The second substantial

reeson

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reason

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for the current discussion is

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does not pay attention to

sports

in the

universities

. Maybe

university

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have some people

they

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have

skill

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for

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sports

and can be

a

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good

athlete

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.

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because

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not

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pay

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attention to

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daily exercise ,

students

can’t use from

university

gym

or act .

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example

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my brother is

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good football player but

university

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do

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not receive them and he read

book

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in

library

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. In conclusion, there are various positive

point

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to

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money

to

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students

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sports

activities as they allocate to their libraries. But it seems to me that the benefits of

spend

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money

to

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gym

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instead

of make

library

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in

universities

certainly outweigh the drawback