some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled.they say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. to what extant do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

In Our modern society as the population grow more
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are born. Nowadays the waste From homes is a major problem in big cities so, we use our technology to recycle them. Some
People
claim that most of the waste is not recycled anymore so they offer to make it a legal requirement. In
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passage I discuss how much laws can be practical in
this
situation. Global laws are useful and
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for our life Because they are showing us the best way to protect our environment and
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our planet Earth.
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are
make
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every day in our world and recycling is our method to control it and make sure that we do not make a detrimental effect
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nature.
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,Many
people
in different cities and
also
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urban
have is special trashcan to put their dry and wet rubbish in
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separated
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pocket
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in order to make sure that they can recycle
after
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the collection. So, Government have to teach
people
how to separate their garbage which can happen by putting different trash cans with different
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and
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advertisements in
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to convince
people
to do so.
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,
People
should make it happen are not living in
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city we are a small global village Which can affect our environment. We all have to respect the rules of our town and
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recycling should be one of our daily
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to respect natural rules. Rules can be useful for
people
to force them but they should be aware of the responsibility of
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nature.
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, We are living
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Earth we do not have many
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appropriate
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to live We should protect our home
As well as
our planet.
Government
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have a Responsibility to
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culture
recycling habit but
people
should put
this
recycling project to
thier
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their
priorities and make it a legal requirement in their minds.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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