You recently purchased a new laptop online, but when it arrived, it was damaged. Write a letter of complaint to the company and: Explain why you are writing Describe the problem with the laptop State what you would like the company to do about it
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with your online store purchase which I made
last
month. I purchased an HP brand laptop
on your Big Sunday sale last
month, and I made full payment using my credit card. Although
I received my shipment on time last
week, the product was damaged. while
unboxing the package I noticed that the screen of the item was broken and the keyboard is seems
dirty. I have attached a copy of the bill Change the verb form
seems
along with
this
letter for your reference.
I have contacted your customer service and registered a complaint immediately. They offered to send a new laptop
within 24 hours, however
, until today I have not received any replacement. I purchased this
laptop
for my son, who will enrol for his college next week. Therefore
, I am requesting you to replace the laptop
as soon as possible.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
Jennifer Ramos.Submitted by ck.manshad on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite