Nowadays, people always throw old things away and buy new things, whereas in the past, old things were repaired and used again. What factors cause this phenomenon? What effects does the phenomenon lead do?

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In recent years, most people tend to purchase new items but throw old
things
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away,
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repair
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and
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something old were very popular in the past.
Although
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there are many feasible reasons
of
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this
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trend, these sequences could be brought about. There are two underlying reasons
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why the masses have a tendency for buying something new and throw something old in these days. First and foremost, each individual has a sense of
lucky
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and
remove
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removes
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black
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mood.
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, in Vietnam, when it comes to
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holiday, each family always clean their
house
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and
throw
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throws
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old
things
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away like clothes, shoes, utensils, and so on, to welcome new
things
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in the next new year. Another driving factor
that
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many
of
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people cannot afford to allocate a huge amount of money to purchase new
things
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. Taking Vietnam as an instance, a new
house
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costs one million dollars as compared to the spending of repairing an old
house
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with
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approximately some hundred thousand dollars. I would
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contend
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that the growing trend is going to have serious repercussions not only
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family but
also
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on
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society. Regarding the former, spending the bulk of money on buying
some
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things
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new
are
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is
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very
wasted
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waste
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for each family.
Besides
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, the value of
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tradition will be lost by replacing antique
things
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into
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with
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modern ones,
such
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as
medival
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medical
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interior facilities
by
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in
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Chinese style. With respect to the latter, repairing an old
house
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is not enough safe to stay in because it can be broken anytime.
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, it could be affected
on
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by
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the
househole
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household
surrounding because
of
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run-down houses
needed
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needing
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to displace
new
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into new
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ones. In conclusion,
this
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trend is caused by many justifiable reasons, and I
convinced
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am convinced
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that
this
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phenomenon has a number of negative implications for the family and society.
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