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Some people says that music is a good way of bringing people of different culturs and ages to gather. What to extend do you agree or disagree.

#people #music #culturs #ages
Music
 is like a bridge
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between different nations, cultures and communities. In my opinion
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satement
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statement
 mentioned above is so true and I completely agree with it. It brings
people
 together who are complete strangers, have nothing in common, unrelated to each other and many more. In the beginning, I would like to
share
 a live example
which
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 we all must have witnessed.
peoploe
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People
 usually go
for
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clubbing these days where there is a huge crowd of unknowns. We
usual
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 go with couple
friends
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of friends
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 but if you may recall we interact with numerous individuals. Some
people
 might end up making new friends. If we notice on social platforms where we follow our
favoraite
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favourite
music
 celebrities as well, whenever they release new
music
people
 dance on it or sing along and shoot videos. Singers
share
 those videos which they
recieve
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receive
 from different parts of
world
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the world
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 even though
people
 do not understand the lyrics properly.
Audience
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The audience
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 just
enjoy
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 the beats and vibes of the
music
 which encourage them to get connected with certain
language's
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languages
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 or
comunities'
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communities'
music
. Moving forward,
while
 visiting
to
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any social event,
people
 tend to talk about background
music
 as
a
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the
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 first topic of interaction when they meet. With
introduction
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the introduction
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 of new
music
forms
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,forms
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 there are thousands of
music
 festivals which take place around the globe.
People
 from worldwide travel thousands of
kilometers
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kilometres
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 to
particiapate
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participate
 and come to know more rituals,
cultures
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and cultures
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 followed by
people
 living there, visiting to function from other regions. We never know from whom we would get to learn something which could make our lives easier and
peaceful
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more peaceful
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. Nations like
Indian
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India
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 and Pakistan do not
share
 a very friendly relationship
due to
 some governmental issues but
people
 from both nations
share
same
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the same
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 interests in
music
. Singers and
music
 directors from both
contrries
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countries
 work together and release
meledious
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melodious
 songs for their fans frequently. Through
music
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,music
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 we get to know each other, clear misunderstandings and tend to understand other person's perspectives. In conclusion, I would like to say that
music
 has no borders or boundaries and nobody in
this
 whole wide world is powerful enough to capture it
at
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 one place. It is like a free bird which can fly wherever it wants
on
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at
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 its preferred speed and deliver beautiful messages through
innnovative
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innovative
 creativity by its creator.
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