The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram displays how honey
produced
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is produced
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by
bees
.
Overall
, there are seven stages with four stages namely searching, collecting, processing and production.
To begin
with, a
hive
of
bees
built
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is built
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by
nectars
from flowers. The
bees
use their special ability to find where they can find the source of
nectars
. After they find the flowers, the
bees
start to
collecting
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collect
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nectars
. Since the
nectars
located
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are located
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on the top of flowers, it is easier to
harvesting
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harvest
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.
Next,
the
bees
fly
and
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apply
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back to their
hive
and bring
nectars
. In
this
stage the
bees
start to work, the process is complicated,
include
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including
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air and water evaporation. The
bees
use their wings to
created
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create
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air and the heat evaporated the water from the
hive
. The
hive
has diagonal patterns with golden or yellow
color
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colour
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. The
hive
contains sweet liquid. The
hive
is ready to
harvesting
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harvest
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the honey is
pack
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packed
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to
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into
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some
Correct determiner usage
a
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jar and
seal
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sealed
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. The honey is ready to
distributed
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be distributed
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to customers.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bees, hive, nectars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Metamorphosis
  • Nectar
  • Foraging
  • Pollination
  • Worker bees
  • House bees
  • Honey stomach
  • Honeycomb cells
  • Beeswax
  • Evaporation
  • Hexagon-shaped
  • Simple sugars
  • Enzymes
  • Capping
  • Preserve
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