The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram displays how honey
produced
by Add a missing verb
is produced
bees
.
Overall
, there are seven stages with four stages namely searching, collecting, processing and production.
To begin
with, a hive
of bees
built
by Add a missing verb
is built
nectars
from flowers. The bees
use their special ability to find where they can find the source of nectars
. After they find the flowers, the bees
start to collecting
Wrong verb form
collect
nectars
. Since the nectars
located
on the top of flowers, it is easier to Add a missing verb
are located
harvesting
. Replace the word
harvest
Next,
the bees
fly and
back to their Correct word choice
apply
hive
and bring nectars
. In this
stage the bees
start to work, the process is complicated, include
air and water evaporation. The Change the form of the verb
including
bees
use their wings to created
air and the heat evaporated the water from the Wrong verb form
create
hive
. The hive
has diagonal patterns with golden or yellow color
. The Change the spelling
colour
hive
contains sweet liquid. The hive
is ready to harvesting
the honey is Change the form of the verb
harvest
pack
Wrong verb form
packed
to
Change preposition
into
some
jar and Correct determiner usage
a
seal
. The honey is ready to Wrong verb form
sealed
distributed
to customers.Add a missing verb
be distributed
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bees, hive, nectars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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