The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given diagram displays how honey

produced

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is produced

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by

bees

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.

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, there are seven stages with four stages namely searching, collecting, processing and production.

To begin

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with, a

hive

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of

bees

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built

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is built

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by

nectars

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from flowers. The

bees

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use their special ability to find where they can find the source of

nectars

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. After they find the flowers, the

bees

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start to

collecting

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nectars

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. Since the

nectars

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located

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are located

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on the top of flowers, it is easier to

harvesting

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.

Next,

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the

bees

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fly

and

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apply

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back to their

hive

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and bring

nectars

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. In

this

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stage the

bees

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start to work, the process is complicated,

include

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including

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air and water evaporation. The

bees

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use their wings to

created

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create

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air and the heat evaporated the water from the

hive

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. The

hive

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has diagonal patterns with golden or yellow

color

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colour

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. The

hive

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contains sweet liquid. The

hive

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is ready to

harvesting

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harvest

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the honey is

pack

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packed

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to

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some

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a

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jar and

seal

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sealed

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. The honey is ready to

distributed

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be distributed

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to customers.