Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree? ________________________________________

There is an army of

people

who believes that individuals who have early career plans and stick at it tend to have more satisfying career lives than one

of

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whom change their

jobs

on a daily basis. As far as

this

argument goes, I am not in favour of the aforementioned stance for the following reasons. One of the most pivotal contentions opposed to my idea maintains that taking

jobs

into early consideration enables

people

to know which

jobs

will be suitable for them. Indeed, what they claim is plausible. Various theories have been submitted to prompt researchers to acknowledge that early deliberations will offer

people

insights into their enthusiasts, which can help them choose the right paths.

However

, job satisfaction depends on various factors

such

as

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salary, working conditions, promoting opportunities, working environment… They can affect workers’ decisions of continuing their

jobs

or not.

For example

, my brother started working as a software developer in a well-known company, which necessitated him working 12 hours per day, in an extreme environment. He started burning out after the first few months, finding that he did not lend himself to undertaking that job and decided to become an artist

instead

. Given his wise choice, not only did he have a huge turnover coming from his masterpieces but he was

also

capable of chasing his dream of becoming a professional artist.

Furthermore

, those defenders of

this

argument may insist that following early plans helps

people

with steering clear of career risks. They have their own point in stating

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that.

Nevertheless

, by starting their own businesses can

people

have an opportunity of running their own corporations and

earnlarge

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earn large

incomes, which

consequently

change their lives.

For instance

, if my uncle had not given up his job and had not established his own business, he would not have become a millionaire.

Moreover

, his company soon became an international company and had thousands of subsidiaries worldwide. In conclusion, changing

jobs

provides

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workers with more choices to follow their dreams or walk on their own paths.