You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The given graph illustrates how many
people
visited a museum during two seasons:
summer
and winter in 2003 in the United Kingdom. In general, it could be highlighted that
people
entered
this
museum in
summer
more often than did
it
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during the winter season. Another interesting point is that
people
who visited
this
place did
in
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it in
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the afternoon mostly. Looking at the details, as regards
summer
visitors, it could be clearly seen that the number of
people
experienced a gradual increase from opening hours to 12 o'clock, After that, it dropped significantly from 1500 visitors to 800, and
then
fell. If we look at the winter period, what stands out from the graph is that the number of
people
who visited the museum was very small compared to the
summer
. It started from 500 visitors in opening hours, reached a peak at 600 and
then
dropped sharply to 0 in 14.00. For the
last
three hours of working nobody visited
this
place of interest.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, summer with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Peak season
  • Off-peak season
  • Visitor influx
  • Steady increase
  • Significant drop
  • Month-on-month comparison
  • Seasonal variation
  • Cultural attraction
  • Tourism trends
  • Historical data
  • Visitor demographics
  • Analytical observation
  • Comparative analysis
  • Statistical evidence
  • Conclusive summary
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