People these days buy things that they do not even need. Why do you think people buy unwanted things? Will this have a positive or negative effect on individual and society? What do you think?

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era, we live in a world where we can almost get everything in a click of a button and it is highly challenging for any man to distinguish between his needs and wants. It is highly likely that many things around us are not utilized enough,

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we buy them but, never really use them after a point.

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trend has been a common issue among many middle-class households, which is primarily

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E-commerce.

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essay will elaborate more on the reasons for

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trend and discuss the implications it has on individuals and societies.

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, I would say that the reasons people are buying more and more beyond their needs are

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the ever-growing purchasing capacity of individuals.

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, it is quite evident that E-commerce has led to the formation of

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global market where

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can find any brand under their budget and get them right at their doorstep.

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, fashion application like Myntra, and Amazon has given

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a wide range of options under budget , which has compelled the public to make a purchase even if they might not need them.

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, lucrative offers/ persuasive advertisement has contributed to

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trend.

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, BUY 2 GET 2 offer, people are tempted to buy two even if they need

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, offers like that will end up buying them four of them.

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pattern may bring a short-term positive impact on individuals.

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means that the person might feel a sense of satisfaction after making a purchase.

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, I agree that

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sector has generated many job opportunities like content creator, influencer, digital marketing etc.

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, it leads to huge

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to the environment in terms of carbon footprints.

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means, when your parcel is packed, stored and transported,

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has an impact on the carbon footprint in our environment.

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I agree that our needs have mushroomed with the onset of e-commerce, I still believe as a responsible citizen,

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has to make a judicious purchase regarding any commodity.

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is irrespective of the fact if you can afford it or not. I did not intend to stand against purchasing

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, the point stands here is that appreciate the comfort and the time we are living in and buy only if you think

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is within your need.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

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Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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People these days buy things that they do not even need. Why do you think people buy unwanted things? Will this have a positive or negative effect on individual and society? What do you think?

Your opinion

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