The diagram details the process of making leather products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram details the process of making leather products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the way in which
leather
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goods are made.
Overall
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, there are 11 stages in the process, beginning with drying animal
skin
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and culminating in
leather
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products.
Initially
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, animal
skin
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is dried under the sun for a few days. After that, the dried
skin
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is delivered to a factory using a truck. The next stage is washing the
leather
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in a mixture of lime and water.
Then
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, the washed
leather
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is soaked using lime to remove fur. Next,the soaked
skin
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is flattered to make the surface smoother. Once
this
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stage is completed, the
leather
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goes through a soaking process using tannin which is made of water and vegetable matter to prevent roating and make it
last
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forever.
Following
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this
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, the
leather
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is polished by a roller in order to make it shiny. Later, the polished
leather
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is delivered to another factory.
At the end
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of the process, the
leather
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is ready to turn into a variety of
leather
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items
such
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as boots, bags, and balls.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words leather, skin with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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