The diagram details the process of making leather products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the way in which,

leather

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products are made in modern industry. At the onset,

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there are 11 stages in the method, beginning with the drying

animal

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skin

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and culminating in the realization of finished products.

To begin

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, making

leather

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goods starts with drying an animal’s

skin

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.

This

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skin

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is

then

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delivered to the factory for the next industrial actions. Afterwards, the

skin

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is washed in water with lime to remove all the dirt.

Following

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this

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, soaking takes place with the addition of lime, which gives the

skin

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moisture.

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, the roller machine delicately flattened the

skin

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. Once

this

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stage is completed it

start

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starts

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tanning and soaking process with water and

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vegetables

vegetable

. During the

process

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the

skin

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totally

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is totally

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cleaned from hair, protein, fat, and greases.

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, the

leather

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is polished to a shine and glow.

At the end

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of the process, cleaned and polished

leather

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is transported to the factory for

preparation

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the preparation

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of

leather

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goods

such

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as shoes, bags, and sports equipment.