The diagram details the process of making leather products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram details the process of making leather products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the way in which,
leather
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products are made in modern industry. At the onset,
it is clear that
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there are 11 stages in the method, beginning with the drying
animal
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skin
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and culminating in the realization of finished products.
To begin
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, making
leather
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goods starts with drying an animal’s
skin
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.
This
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skin
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is
then
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delivered to the factory for the next industrial actions. Afterwards, the
skin
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is washed in water with lime to remove all the dirt.
Following
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this
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, soaking takes place with the addition of lime, which gives the
skin
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moisture.
Subsequently
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, the roller machine delicately flattened the
skin
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. Once
this
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stage is completed it
start
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starts
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tanning and soaking process with water and
vegetabels
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vegetables
vegetable
. During the
process
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process,
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the
skin
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totally
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is totally
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cleaned from hair, protein, fat, and greases.
Finally
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, the
leather
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is polished to a shine and glow.
At the end
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of the process, cleaned and polished
leather
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is transported to the factory for
preparation
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the preparation
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of
leather
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goods
such
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as shoes, bags, and sports equipment.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words leather, skin with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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