What distinguishes young people from their parents' or grandparents' generation is a lack of physical exercise. Today's generation are spending far too long playing computer games, chatting aimlessly on social networking sites or simply watching TV, and too little time being active. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In

this

modern era, young ones are spending too much

time

on electronic gadgets. They use electronic gadgets for different purposes

such

as playing games, chatting and so on.

Due to

,

this

they do less physical exercise.

Although

I agree with the given notion up to a large extent, I

also

believe that there are some other reasons for doing less exercise by youngsters. which will be elaborated

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the subsequent paragraphs. A number of reasons why young

people

prefer to spend their

time

using smartphones and other gadgets

instead

of doing physical exercises. The predominant one is that young

people

want to get enjoyment by playing games on their smartphones. They do not want to do physical

activities

as they are very laziest

people

. For doing physical

activities

they need more energy which is not in today's generation. Young ones prefer less healthy food

that

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is why they have less energy.

Moreover

, they do not need to go anywhere for meeting or communicating with their near and dear as they can talk to them with the aid of mobile phones

due to

this

they are very laziest as compared to their ancestors. In the past ,

time

there is no kind of electronic which is why

people

have to go outside for meeting with others.

However

, there are some other reasons for performing less physical

activities

by today's young

people

. In

this

modern era , everyone becomes a workaholic, so they have less

time

for going to the park, gym and many more. They have to do a lot of work in a day and which they have to perform only on computers. In

this

competitive epoch, everyone has to do a lot of work for attaining success in their life.Owing to

this

young ones are not able to do physical

activities

.Ergo,

this

could lead to numerous health problems in the future which could not be worthwhile for them. In conclusion,

although

due to

more usage of

technology

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youngsters are not able to do physical

activities

, I

also

believe that there are some others of performing less physical exercises by today's generation which are crucial to consider.