The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities

The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities
The maps show an island before and after the construction of tourist facilities and these
plan
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illustrate to us how construction will
effect
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affect
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the development of the
isle
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island
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. First of all, in the past reef had empty of any structure or buildings so there were no
tourist
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tourists
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in the area. But when development has been occupied and more huts have been made and another instrument. I will explain
this
in the following essay. In comparison,
it is clear that
many huts have been built on the central island and they are connecting together footpath,
further
reception surrounded by cottages.
On the other hand
, there are woodland in the west and restaurant is seen in the north of the island and tourist can swim in the east behind some accommodation.
More over
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pier, reception and restaurant are associated with vehicle tracks. In conclusion, it is noteworthy b expanding can increase visitors and tourists.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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