some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes Do you agree or disagree?

Some
people
feel that an estimation
someone's
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of someone's
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culture
and
character
from their clothing selection is possible. In my opinion, it is hard to get results about his/her life from
person's
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a person's
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choice of clothes only by visual interrogation.
First,
people
used to understand other's
life style
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lifestyle
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from their wearings. Cultures were isolated,
communities
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and communities
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were not aware of how other ones had traditions.
Thus
, it was simple to tell a lot
a
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about a
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person
from his/her
looking
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.
However
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by
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with
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the globalization of
earth
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the earth
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, cultures affected each other and became
cosmopolite
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.
Furthermore
,
people
are more tend to wear what a
fasion
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fashion
suggests nowadays
that is
hard to estimate his/her
orign
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origin
with visual observation.
For example
,
Indian
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the Indian
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community, known as
local
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the local
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people
of America, can work
any
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in any
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field not only in the country but
also
in
th
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the
world. So
for instance
, an Indian
person
works
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who works
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in Sweeden may have not only
clue
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a clue
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from appearance about his/her
culture
or
character
if wears like Sweedish.
On the other hand
, it is
contraversial
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controversial
to judge
people
from their cloth choice because of
a
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the
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possibility of misunderstandings even if being sure
about
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itabout
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. The
person
visually interrogated might have been living on
streets
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the streets
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or may like
hippie style
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costumes
while
being rich. And
also
coloured
clothings
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clothes
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do not depict any relevant
culture
often.
For example
, I wear usually sportive
clothings
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clothes
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though I am not a
sport
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sports
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player or it does not reflect my
character
and
culture
. To summarize,
people
may select whatever they want to wear without thinking
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about the
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correlation with their
culture
or
character
that
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which
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makes
for
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it for
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people
to
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too
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hard to tell about their appearance.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • attire
  • fashion trends
  • individuality
  • first impressions
  • designer labels
  • social status
  • cultural appropriation
  • dress codes
  • traditional garments
  • sartorial choices
  • symbolism in clothing
  • cultural identity
  • expression of self
  • global fashion industry
  • cultural integration
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