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Transportation ModeAverage Expenditure (USD) - 1999Average Expenditure (USD) - 2007 Taxi10.5015.75 Bus5.256.75 Train12.0016.50 Car rental30.0035.25

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The table provides information on the average expenditures for four different
modes
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 of
transportation
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 in two different years: 1999 and 2007.
Overall
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, the data shows an increase in the average
expenditure
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 across all
modes
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 of
transportation
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 between the two years. In 1999, the average
expenditure
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 for a taxi ride was 10.50
USD
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, which increased to 15.75
USD
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 in 2007.
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, the average
expenditure
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 for a bus ride increased from 5.25
USD
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 in 1999 to 6.75
USD
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 in 2007. The average
expenditure
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 for train travel
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 showed an increase from 12.00
USD
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 in 1999 to 16.50
USD
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 in 2007. The average
expenditure
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 for car rentals was the highest among all
modes
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 of
transportation
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 in both years, with an increase from 30.00
USD
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 in 1999 to 35.25
USD
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 in 2007. In conclusion, the table shows a clear trend of increasing average
expenditure
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 for all
modes
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 of
transportation
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 between 1999 and 2007.
This
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 may be attributed to factors
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 as inflation and changes in the cost of fuel and other operating expenses for
transportation
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 providers.
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