1. You and a friend recently went on a holiday together. There is a problem with the photos you have taken during the holiday. Write a letter to your friend to ask for a particular shot. In your letter - tell him/her about the problem with your photos - say which photo you would like him/her to send you - explain why you need this photo.

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Dear Lily, I am just writing to ask you about some photos that you have taken during our trip to Europe. Unfortunately, something went wrong with my camera and I am disappointed that it is figured out so late.

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, half of the pictures are entirely white, so I do not have any shots from Paris and Milan. I hope it won't disturb you to send me a few photos. First of all, do you have pictures of me standing near the Eiffel Tower? My mom was dreaming to visit it,

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why I have to show them her!

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, I would really like to have some random photos of Milan's streets and architecture. I am not sure if I told you that I am going to write my graduate work about Middle Ages architecture, so I want to attach these real shots. I hope it will result in enhancing my score. I would really appreciate it if you will send me them by the end of the next week. Thanks a lot for your help and I hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes,

Aliia

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Alicia

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

188 words

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