More developing countries are given aid from international organisations to help them in their development plans. Some people argue that financial aid is important but others suggest that practical aid and advice are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

More semi-developed

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receive help from overseas organizations to improve their development aims. It is argued that helping with

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is essential but others claim that asking for

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and practical help is more essential.

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receiving help financially is effective for short-term goals, l believe that getting help with

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and practicals is more beneficial for long-term goals. On the one hand, developing

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need cash

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to improve themselves. In a short period of ,time it is helping them a lot. But, as they are developing

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, most of the time they are not capable to invest that

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efficiently.

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to say, they need to learn the

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to use

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in an effective

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to improve their economy.

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, Turkey is one of the developing

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and when they have cash

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from international organisations, they tend to use build higher buildings or invest in fields which is useless for the future of the nation.

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, I believe that even if it is beneficial for the short term, it is better to follow the latter thought.

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, helping developing

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with

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and practices is the best

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to help them. It is better to teach them how the fishing

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of giving them fish. Using that

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in a better

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will improve

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' living standards and economy. Taking the example of developed

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and trying to imitate their practices will help them in the long term.

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, a Developed country namely Germany , is investing their population to improve their practical side and give them life-saving

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to be the best in all fields.

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they are producing nearly all engines in all sectors. I believe

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school of thought is preferable because

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need to understand that long-term investments are more likely to help them to be developed

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. In conclusion,

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getting help financially saves today, l claim that receiving help as

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and improving themselves in a practical

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is more important for

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' fate.