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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram shows the components of a neuron and how it works Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram shows the components of a neuron and how it works Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The diagram illustrates important parts of
neuron
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the neuron
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 and its function.
Overall
, there are five different components in a
neuron
 which ensure its efficient working. The main constitute of
neuron
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a neuron
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 is
cell
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the cell
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body
 which is located
in
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centrally in between
denrites
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dendrites
. Dendrites are the limbs of
neuron
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neurons
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 which branch out around the cell
body
 and their job is to receive messages from other neurons. Axon is a
tube like
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 structure which transfers the messages from
cell
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the cell
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body
 to various neurons, muscles or glands. The electric signal travelling down
axon
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the axon
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 results in
action
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the action
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 of muscles or other
body
 parts as a reaction to these electric signals.
Furthermore
,
myellin
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myelin
 sheath is another major component which enhances
the
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neural impulses. It
cover
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 the axon of certain neurons which helps
speeding
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 up the neural impulses. The
last
 element of
neuron
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a neuron
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 is terminal buttons which
has
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 branches and
connects
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 a particular
neuron
 to other cells. In conclusion, the
neuron
 is composed of five different parts which are essential for
transfer
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the transfer
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 of impulses so that our
body
 could react to various situations.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words neuron, body with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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