The first graph gives the number of passengers travelling by train in Sydney. The second graph provides information on the percentage of trains running on time.
The first line graph illustrates the number of train passengers in Sydney, The second line graph gives information on the rate of
trains
running on the time
between 1995 and 2004.
Overall
, the number of train passengers experienced an upward trend while
the percentage of trains
running on time
showed a downward trend. The rate of trains
time
fluctuated throughout the period.
At the beginning of the trend, the number of customers accounted for 250 million
. Subsequently
, gradually increased to nearly 266 million
until 1999. Then
, increased significantly and peaked at 300 million
in 2001. Afterwards, plummeted to 280 million
in 2002. Between 2002 and 2004 remained relatively stable.
In 1995, the rate of trains
time
made up around 93% but started to fall steadily to just above 86% until 1997. From 1997 to 2003, went up and down between 85% and approximately 93%. Between 2003 and 2004, sharply decreased to almost 73% and hit to low-point.Submitted by gultekinmahmutgazi on
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