You recently ordered something online. When the delivery came, it was not complete. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, Explain what you ordered and what was missing from your delivery Explain the importance of this delivery ask for a replacement item to be sent

Hello Mr Charles, I wish to complain about a standing

fan

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, with reference number 70357925, that I purchased on the 1st of May, 2023. I am complaining because the

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chunk and some screws to hold the blade in position are missing from the delivered package. To resolve

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problem, I would like for a replacement to be sent to me. It is a factory-made standing

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, which was supposed to come with three

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blades, a standing pole to hold the blade, and a

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wedge, to keep the

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standing.

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, there should be a variety of screws accompanying the package, which helps tighten different parts together. I was shocked when I could not find the

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wedge and some screws. The importance of the

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wedge cannot be overemphasized because, without it, the

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cannot stand properly.

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, I cannot fix the blades in position because the nuts are missing.

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that summer starts in a few days, and without

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, my room will become hot and stuffy. Moving forward, I would like to request a replacement as soon as possible. Kindly guide me on how I can return what I have. Please respond as soon as possible as I do not want to escalate

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matter to the public. Thanks, in anticipation. Yours sincerely, Mr. Philip Osadebay

philipbay20

May 8, 2023

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

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