You have rented a house by a lake for the summer. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter •describe the house •describe how you are spending your time there •invite your friend to come and visit Begin your letter as follows: Dear………..

#house #lake #summer #friend #•describe #time #•invite #visit #dear………

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Dear Annie I am writing

this

letter to bring to your notice that I have rented a lakeside home . The house is beautiful one on the

lake

side . It's surrounded by a

lake

in the backside and by a road in the front side. The

lake

is 3 km long and boats are run in the

lake

on a daily basis.

This

lake

is a straight one and the house owner has provided a

boat

to enjoy

boat

riding in the

lake

Furthermore

, At the weekend I do

boat

rides

along with

my colleagues who generally come at the weekend , we roam in the

boat

for 2 to 3 hours in the afternoon and in the evening we just enjoy the beauty of the

lake

by observing it.

Therefore

, I would like to invite you to spend a few days in my lakeside home and enjoy the lakeside view . We can enjoy

boat

rides at the weekend and barbeques at night . It will be an unforgettable experience for you. Looking forward to hosting you soon Best wishes, John

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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183 words

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