The bar chart illustrates the percentage of households inowned and rented houses in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of households inowned and rented houses in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
The bar chart shows the rate of households owning and renting accommodations in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
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experienced a downward trend
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, owned houses percentages outraced the rented houses. At the beginning of the period, people who bought a house accounted for nearly 22%.
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, increased significantly by around 10 percent in 1939, and continued to rise steadily to just under 70% until 2001 . Afterwards, slightly declined to about 62% in 2011. In 1918 living temporarily in accommodations made up just under
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, decreased slightly to roughly 68%. Between
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