TASK-2 Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In

this

day and age, the latest innovation has been introducing more playing equipment in the

the

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market that

fascinate

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the customers to buy them. In my opinion, its cons are more than its merits because a large

number

of

trinket

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make him introvert a

child

indulge always

in door

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activities.I will articulate my pinpoints in an upcoming paragraph. To commence with, many guardians spend

a huge amounts

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huge amounts

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on

toys

to give happiness to their children. It has some pros like

a

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kids

spend primary time with their

toys

and parent used to play with

him

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them

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.

For instance

, in Asian ,countries most

of

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the

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parents set up separate rooms for their

child

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children

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in which they put many more expensive and numerous sorts of

toys

and they became happy and learned many more at an early age.

Secondly

, some

toys

like puzzle games are creative it's

take

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a brain to build up a structure

then

an individual learns how to make that puzzle on his own.

Thirdly

, he used to live in

the

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marvellous environment he always play with

toys

and don't have any concerns about outdoor activities he will not abuse by other

kids

in his street. On the flip side,

toys

with huge numbers make a

child

introverted. He spend most of his time on their

toys

and engaged himself in the four walls of his house.

For instance

, a

child

in our neighbours who is a single kid of his parents, he

don't

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have much social contact with others just because of his

toys

. He considers if I make new friends they take off all my

toys

.

Secondly

,

occasionly

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occasionally

when the financial status is not strong than a

child

becomes stubborn about buying his desired items

of

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playing

Thus

, a massive

number

of

toys

make a

child

extrovert and

sometimesshow

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sometimes show

stubbornness and symptoms of jealousy and pride for poor

kids

. To recapitulate, parents should take

toys

for

kids

in maximum

number

only that build their creative skills and not makes them used to of expensive and

number

of other

toys