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Nowadays, people have little awareness of the importance of the natural world. What are the reasons and how can people learn more about the natural world?

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In recent times,
individual
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individuals
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 have small knowledge of the relevance of the natural
world
 there are various reasons do
this
 which include
increasing
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the increasing
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 death
rate
 affects and the effects of
pollution
 and
an
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individuals
 can be taught more through
the
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social media and
government
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the government
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 creating more awareness.
To begin
 with, human
being
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beings
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 are beginning to know the importance of
a
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the
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 natural
world
 because of the increase in the loss of human lives
that is
as
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a result of our carelessness towards nature. It's been observed that the
rate
 of disease and illness has drastically gone up
due to
 the way
individuals
 less value natural plants, air ,
water
 and soil.
For example
, in the recent
time
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 the extent
in
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 which deforestation is taking place has made it difficult for
individuals
 to get fresh and good air for breathing. Most of the
airs
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air
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 we received a contaminated
as a result
 of
construction
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the construction
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 of buildings leading to congestion and
also
 Bush burning which can lead to one disease or the other when
over
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accumulated.
On the other hand
, the
rate
 of
pollution
 is on the increase as
this natural things
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this natural thing
these natural things
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such
 as air,
water
 and the environment at large are been polluted by human activities
such
this
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as this
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, leading to
increase
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an increase
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 in illnesses around the
world
. Because
of
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this
pollution
that
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occurs, it will be difficult to get clean
water
 food or plant and
healthy
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a healthy
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 environment.
For instance
, the
rate
 of industrial
pollution
 is
is
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affecting
clean
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the clean
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water
 we get from the river and
also
 sea creatures
such
 as fish.
Individuals
 can be educated more about the natural
world
 through the government creating awareness
through
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by
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 organising programs and sending out
informations
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information
pieces of information
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 on the importance
on
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of
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 social
medias
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media
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. To summit up,
individuals
 should be educated on the relevances of nature through social platforms and creating awareness in the villages and other important places so as to cut down the effect that comes with abuse to
natural
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the natural
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 environment.
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