Write about the following topic: In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write atleast 250 words.

Over
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recent years, the online paying industry has developed a lot.
The payments
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are made by card or phone in most situations, so I do think in the future,
cash
would be replaced by online payment totally,
although
some
people
still prefer
cash
.
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essay will discuss both sides of the argument, followed by my own perspective. On the one hand, some
people
would not give up
cash
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cash
is not only some functional coins, but
also
are symbols of our culture.
For example
, we can often see different ancient coins in the museum, which indeed represent the feature of that era.
Besides
, history
reseachers
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researchers
can find tons of information through
these old '
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cash
', the cultural meaning they represent is priceless.
On the other hand
, in my opinion,
although
cash
carries crucial historical meaning, it will still vanish someday for the following reasons.
Firstly
, the technology is boosting fast, and payment online is far more
convienent
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convenient
than
cash
.
People
can complete payments just in seconds, without any risk of
wrong
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number
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.
Secondly
, it is more safe and lower
demand
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knowledge.
For instance
, some older
people
may go out
and
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shopping alone. It may be lost easily if they carry lots of
cash
with them, not to speak of the risk
being
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fraud or robber.
Finally
, we can not deny the fact that
cash
is not
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friendly, every year tons of metal
are
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used for making coinage, which is non-renewable energy. In conclusion, as discussed above,
people
may no longer be able to pay by
cash
in the future and I believe it is a positive trend for all of us.
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