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The line graph shows visits to Disneyland and Sea World from 2001-2005. The bar chart shows the most popular rides and attactions in Disneyland

The line graph shows visits to Disneyland and Sea World from 2001-2005. The bar chart shows the most popular rides and attactions in Disneyland
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The line graph given portrays the
number
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 of
visitors
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 to
Disneyland
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 and
Sea
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World
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 between 2001 and 2005,
while
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 the bar chart given illustrates famous rides and activities in
Disneyland
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.
Overall
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,
Disneyland
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 had the highest
number
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 of
visitors
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 in the
Sea
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World
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.
However
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, there were five activities in
Disneyland
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 that attract
visitors
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, and Splash Mountain was the top choice of all attractions there. Looking into the details, there were more than 50
million
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 people coming to Disney Land in 2005. The
number
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 increased every year in the past. In 2001,
Disneyland
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 had around 10
million
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 guests
whereas
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 the
Sea
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World
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 had less than that
number
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.
Moreover
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, the
number
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 of
visitors
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 grew up dramatically in the next year until 2005. In contrary, there were fluctuating numbers in
Sea
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World
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 in 2002 but slightly increased in the following years until 2005.
Furthermore
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, Splash Mountain was the top-ranked ride in
Disneyland
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 with 12
million
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visitors
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 and the second place was the Haunted Mansion with 9
million
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 people.
On the other hand
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, the rest activities had no more than 4
million
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 guests, and Jungle Cruise was the least with only 2
million
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 people.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, disneyland, sea, world, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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