The line graph shows visits to Disneyland and Sea World from 2001-2005. The bar chart shows the most popular rides and attactions in Disneyland
The line graph given portrays the
number
of visitors
to Disneyland
and Sea
World
between 2001 and 2005, while
the bar chart given illustrates famous rides and activities in Disneyland
.
Overall
, Disneyland
had the highest number
of visitors
in the Sea
World
. However
, there were five activities in Disneyland
that attract visitors
, and Splash Mountain was the top choice of all attractions there.
Looking into the details, there were more than 50 million
people coming to Disney Land in 2005. The number
increased every year in the past. In 2001, Disneyland
had around 10 million
guests whereas
the Sea
World
had less than that number
. Moreover
, the number
of visitors
grew up dramatically in the next year until 2005. In contrary, there were fluctuating numbers in Sea
World
in 2002 but slightly increased in the following years until 2005.
Furthermore
, Splash Mountain was the top-ranked ride in Disneyland
with 12 million
visitors
and the second place was the Haunted Mansion with 9 million
people. On the other hand
, the rest activities had no more than 4 million
guests, and Jungle Cruise was the least with only 2 million
people.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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