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The line graph shows visits to Disneyland and Sea World from 2001-2005. The bar chart shows the most popular rides and attactions in Disneyland

The line graph shows visits to Disneyland and Sea World from 2001-2005. The bar chart shows the most popular rides and attactions in Disneyland
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The line graph given portrays the
number
 of
visitors
 to
Disneyland
 and
Sea
World
 between 2001 and 2005,
while
 the bar chart given illustrates famous rides and activities in
Disneyland
.
Overall
,
Disneyland
 had the highest
number
 of
visitors
 in the
Sea
World
.
However
, there were five activities in
Disneyland
 that attract
visitors
, and Splash Mountain was the top choice of all attractions there. Looking into the details, there were more than 50
million
 people coming to Disney Land in 2005. The
number
 increased every year in the past. In 2001,
Disneyland
 had around 10
million
 guests
whereas
 the
Sea
World
 had less than that
number
.
Moreover
, the
number
 of
visitors
 grew up dramatically in the next year until 2005. In contrary, there were fluctuating numbers in
Sea
World
 in 2002 but slightly increased in the following years until 2005.
Furthermore
, Splash Mountain was the top-ranked ride in
Disneyland
 with 12
million
visitors
 and the second place was the Haunted Mansion with 9
million
 people.
On the other hand
, the rest activities had no more than 4
million
 guests, and Jungle Cruise was the least with only 2
million
 people.
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