Environmental damage is a problem in most countries. What factors damage the environment and who should take responsibility?

For over the
last
two or three decades, environmental degradation is a major world problem. Mankind activities are being put the ecosystem in a worse condition compared to the past. In
this
essay, I will look at the reasons for
this
and propose some solutions.
Initially
, air
pollution
has deteriorated as time goes by since we as a human mostly drive our own cars because of their convenience and deliberately make conurbations cover by clouds of
pollution
all the time. As proven by statistics, vehicles exhaust fumes in an enormous amount and it rises into the atmosphere which makes the condition insurmountable.
For instance
, most cars on roads are transported by one passenger ;
therefore
, if these drivers utilized public vehicles,
this
would diminish the amount of
pollution
. To tackle
this
problem, the government should enhance taxes on fuel
as well as
launch several campaigns to enthuse citizens about public transport vehicles.
Secondly
, the majority of factories are working hard to present all demands. It means they burn fossil fuels as high as they can and
as a result
, emits greenhouse gases into the globe
whereas
this
amount was very low in the past.
In addition
, these harmful gases contribute to global warming
along with
melting the polar Ice cap and it happens because of nations' materialistic view.
For instance
, my cousin has several newly bought outfits that she never wears most of them. A solution is for the power to put a ban on burning high amounts of fossil fuels by factories
along with
encouraging communities to recyclable objects rather than new ones. In conclusion, air
pollution
is getting worse and worse, and unless we preclude
this
devastating situation from continuing by way of using public transport systems and paying attention to recycling schemes to conserve our planet. Personally, in my opinion, the solution lies with both the authority and conscious people.
Submitted by mehrdad.salahi2003 on

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