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Some people say football players who have talent are the best. Others say players who learn the skill are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #football #players #talent #skill
This
 essay argued that sportsmen have special abilities in the sport. ,
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However
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 some of them
also
 think
also
 need more soft
skills
 are encourage their aims soon as possible. I strongly agreed with the suggestions completely with both are important for every player and their team
while
 these are the crucial points important for our team can win without any commitments. On the one hand, the special ability ei; talent is a major essential
aspect
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 for the player, for ,example Ronaldo is a talented person in football. She has millions of fans around the world, most of their face following his style and attitudes The major critical factor is that the person definitely follows the maximum good behaviours. The reason is all humans are following a model.
On the other hand
, beyond dought talented person
also
 builds more soft
skills
such
 as teamwork, coordination, social
skills
, hard work and main
skills
 discipline when well may help to build every player to support all co-player and the team will win without difficulties.
For example
, India is nowadays a big competitor in cricket sport for all other nations including Sri Lanka and Australia
for instance
 the
last
 t20 match. The main reason India has good unit support.
To conclude
, the sportsman should have talent and
also
 partake in some
skills
 to improve more abilities and it helps to build more effective
member
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 and the country
also
 become no-one country in the world.
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