In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

One of the directions of modern philosophical thought is libertarianism. Libertarians consider freedom as the most important for a fair society. Freedom should be equal

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in finance, but often these two paradigms conflict with each other. In my essay, I will consider different

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to equality of the economic situation in the population. In the

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I want to start from the concept of freedom. The earning of each person should be equal

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state taxes. People who have done great efforts to achieve an increased income shouldn’t be punished. Efforts devaluation can lead to

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decrease and turn active citizens

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, increasing taxes for rich people leads to averaging the income of the population.

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leads to a lack of jealousy and a decrease

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aggression

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each other, which causes a decrease in crime.

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, the impact on income can affect the safety

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the country. To avoid a critical stratification in society, it

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don’t pinch people with high wealth, but to support the lower economic class. The position of

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countries is close to me.

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, Netherlands, the state gives benefits to small businesses, and when the profit increases, the standard taxation system begins.

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, I firmly believe that the future is with replacing the oppression of some with the support of others.