mojdeh, 10:03 AMSome people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, but other people think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen at TV and the internet. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

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days, experiencing other countries is an interesting activity among young
people
. There are two main ways to do
this
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abroad and watching
TV
and the
internet
. Many
people
said that visiting other nations is abundant because
TV
and the
internet
provide all the
information
you need.
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the one hand,
TV
and the
internet
bring many benefits for
people
who want to gain knowledge about other cultures.
Firstly
, it is an accessible and convenient tool.
For example
,
people
can easily search
about
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the
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information
of
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a country on the
internet
or
watching
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movies which include
information
about that nation. It helps
people
access
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information
easily and know other countries without going abroad.
Finally
, it is much cheaper for
people
who do not have the condition to travel.
For instance
, it is so pricy to go outside your country that most
people
can not
afford
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. But with
TV
and the
internet
,
people
almost do not have to pay but they still have the experience.
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the other hand, there are
also
some advantages
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traveling
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abroad.
Firstly
, you can experience other cultures in real life.
For example
, visitors can do some traditional activities with local
people
.
travelers
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will gain wonderful experiences and know more about the country in real life.
Finally
,
people
can learn to speak
new
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foreign language.
People
can start learning
new
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language when they go to other nations. It is a rare opportunity for
people
to learn and practice
new
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language with local
people
and widen their knowledge. In conclusion, it is said that it is unnecessary to go abroad because all the knowledge can be gained by watching
TV
and searching the
internet
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. Personally, I think
people
should travel abroad to experience new cultures if they have the condition.
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