The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

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The printout describes the urban area of Ryemouth in 1995 and now after the reconstruction.

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, there have been several changes in the land's usage and addition to public facilities. More than that, there is

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a feature that has been totally removed. There were two main housing complex in the northwest area in 1995,

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, after the refurbishment, the pavement was extended to the left side between the two clusters and some house was added along the new road.

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, before the redevelopment there were large farmland and a forest park beside it on the northeast, yet,

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mainland was rebuilt into a golf and tennis field. On the other part of the village, the cafe and hotel on the southeast remain untouched but there is an additional car park near the hotel. Meanwhile, in the southwest , there has been a tremendous amount of changes.

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, the fish market was replaced by apartments.

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, some restaurants take over the shop's land.

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, the fishing port near the sea was demolished since there is no fresh seafood market left nearby.

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