The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps demonstrate the most significant changes which took place in Stokeford. All in all, since 1930 the city has been turned into a much more convenient and luxurious village with well-developed infrastructure.
Over the period, the area witnessed dramatic changes. The first change that can be noticed is
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number of houses, we can see that a lot of houses have been built from 1930 to 2010. Correct article usage
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, shops were replaced by houses. Only the post office has stayed. On top of that, the primary school has been extended.
Another striking change is that farmlands have been destroyed. Linking Words
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, the large house in the east Linking Words
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changed into a retirement house in 2010. It can Unnecessary verb
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be highlighted that the garden area was shortened. Linking Words
However
, the bridge that goes over River Stoke has stayed at the same position. During the 70-year period, the industrial area was totally transformed.Linking Words
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