Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools . Others , however , believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion .

Dear
Course
Director, A few months ago I attended your cooking
course
and I am very grateful for
this
learning experience I had in your restaurant. I would like to point out that the
course
was perfect in that it allowed me to learn from experienced chefs, and IN that, it had the perfect balance between practicality, demonstrations and experimentation. And the most important lesson I've learned is that you have to be sure, that you have to experiment and try to perfect. Since I completed your
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course
on vegetable-based seafood. I believe
this
will appeal to those who are vegetarian and healthy eaters and those who want and love to try new things. Looking forward to your reply. Sincerely, your student.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • co-education
  • gender segregation
  • peer pressure
  • academic performance
  • gender stereotypes
  • discrimination
  • social skills
  • teamwork
  • collaboration
  • diversity
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