The diagram below shows the life cycle of a species of large fish called salmon. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram presents general information about

life

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the life

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cycle of a large fish which is called

Salmon

.

Overall

,

this

big fish has 3 stages in its life. Beginning as a

fry

,

then

it grows to turn into a smolt and

end

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ends

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with

adult

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the adult

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Salmon

stage.

At

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In

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the first step,

Salmon

’s eggs are situated between small rocks near the reeds at the upper river with

slow moving

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slow-moving

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water. It takes 5-6 months for an egg to turn into a

fry

which is still small

with

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apply

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about 3-8 cm

length

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in length

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. It is the first serious stage of

Salmon’

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life.

Fry

lives in the lower river with

fast flowing

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fast-flowing

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water and remains there for about 4 years. After that,

fry

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the fry

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develops into

smolt

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a smolt

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with 12-15 cm in length.

Following

this

,

this

young

Salmon

immigrates to

open

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the open

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sea and

live

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there for approximately 5 years.

Subsequently

, Smolt cultivates and becomes an adult

Salmon

which grows enough to reach the length of 70-76 cm.

This

Big

Salmon

goes to the

up side

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upside

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of the river to

lays

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lay

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its eggs.