The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart depicts the outcome of a survey about netizens'
coffee
and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities
.
Overall
, in four cities
: Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane
, and Hobart, their highest habit
was going to a cafe for coffee
or tea in the last
four weeks. The lowest routine that people
did was buying fresh coffee
and it happened in all cities
.
In Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane
, and Hobart, the popular habit
was going to a cafe for coffee
or tea in the last
four weeks, all the percentages above 55% with the highest in Melbourne at 63%. Just for Adelaide, most people
bought instant coffee
. In five cities
, the lowest habit
of netizens was buying fresh coffee
. The lowest number is in Brisbane
at 34%. The habit
of people
buying instant coffee
is not too low but not too higher, in the middle. The highest percentage for bought instant coffee
did by people
in Brisbane
with 50%. The result is higher than the people
who bought fresh coffee
but not too popular than netizen
who went to a cafe.Fix the agreement mistake
netizens
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