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technologies

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people to connect and communicate.

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apps

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a variety of health

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. As you can be aware

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, smartphones

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quality time.

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, staying in touch with friends and family, doing brief chats

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driving, walking or doing school assignments.

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of teens prefer to find out educational skills from online teaching apps

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of learning them from books. Because

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it is way too easier.

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a bunch of downsides. First of all, the majority of humans

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their time with electronics

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laptop

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,

smartphone

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and so forth... Adolescents

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screen per day. It is totally harmful

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physically

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and

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health. Second of all, smartphones easily can create

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the brain and it

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definitely leads to depression, anxiety and sleep loss.

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study shows that smartphones are controlling our brains and making

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difficult to operate. And

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lazy and impatient.

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sleeping to respond

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texts or calls. And

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leads to sleep interruption and disruption. Increasing the light of

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causes the eyes to be tired. In conclusion, we all have to separate our time for electronic tools, leisure activities, studies and for family. In that way, we can be able to live

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healthier and not

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any good or bad situations.