You rented a car from Car Rental Company. The air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it still has not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter – introduce yourself – explain the situation – say what action you would like the company to take

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Dear sir, I am Yousra Ahmed . I am writing to you to complain about your repair services. I rented a car from your company a few days ago. I have complained about the defectiveness of air conditioners in your company's complaint section but I didn't receive any positive response about it. when I drove a car to pick up my family from Hyderabad. At the start of my journey, the air conditioner was working well but suddenly it was not functioning as usual. I have faced a lot of difficulty

due to

your poor services. it made my travelling ruined . I had planned to go to Lahore after that but now it seems to be impossible to continue it. I have been waiting for your service provider at my Hyderabad house for 3 days but I didn't receive any call .forthermore, your complaint section manager is so rude. he gave me the reference number but not guided me properly . if I had known about your car services I would take it on rent. I would like you to take action immediately and send your workers to my recent place as soon as possible.

In addition

, before giving any vehicles for rent you should service your automobile properly . I am waiting for your swift response. yours faithfully Yousra Ahmed

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