The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003.
The line graph shows
that
the information the Correct word choice
apply
number
of tourists visiting a museum in the summer
and winter in 2003. Overall
, the number
of guest
entering in Fix the agreement mistake
guests
summer
is higher than it in
winter.
The Add a missing verb
is in
number
of visitors in summer
was
Unnecessary verb
apply
rised
gradually to 1400, because in Correct your spelling
raised
risen
summer
all everybody has a days
off so they can go somewhere to take a rest. Correct the article-noun agreement
a day
days
In addition
, their parents take them to a museum, a place for children can improve their knowledge, but it decreased slowly to 0 in 1800.
The number
of guests in winter was lower than it in
Add a missing verb
was in
summer
, it was the highest in 1200 about 600 people, and dropped quickly to 0 in
1400 to 1800.Change preposition
from
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