The first graph gives the number of passengers travelling by train in Sydney. The second graph provides information on the percentage of trains running on time.

The first graph gives the number of passengers travelling by train in Sydney. The second graph provides information on the percentage of trains running on time.
The primary line chart indicates how many passengers travelled by Sydney's train between 1995 and 2004
while
the other illustrates the percentage of the trains which came on time.
Overall
, what
stand
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out from the graph is that
whereas
the number of commuters and travellers went up gradually before
its
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dropping from 2001, the proportion of punctual railways witnessed a fluctuation followed by a striking fall.
To begin
with the figure
of
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passengers, their starting number was 250 million in 1995, after which grew by degree until the peak at 300 million in 2001.
However
, in the next year,
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the
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contrast to the proceeding rising, it slumped to end up with the figure at 280
millions
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which was 30
millions
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more in 2004 compared to its original.
On the other hand
,
although
the percentage presented how often trains in Sydney run on time fluctuated between about 93% and 85%
buring
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during
the initial 15 years by 2003, it plummeted in the final year to reach its trough st
apploximately
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approximately
73%.
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